gentle turn *IBPC Nomination*
root dust greys what landscapeout of headlight rangeexpands within branches to netwhole troops in ambiguitytelling time asleepacuity begins a shiftthese leaves releasesuch catalystsgathered absorbed...
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This is soothing, somewhat like turning a light down, or watching candles swallow the corners. I thought on first read, that you said "wheat landscape" but wouldn't that be a cool image? I enjoyed...
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The twilight, dusk or dawn, has always been my favorite time of day. There is so much about this poem that I love, I don't even know where to begin: the dreamy mood, your word choices, the images they...
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Neil, I liked this, though not totally clear why! I liked particularly the sense of satisfied resolution that the final stanza expressed, at least to me!
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Hey, this made me feel quite relaxed and that sez a lot. However interpreted, for each his/her own, I like and appreciate the calm.
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thanks everybody for your kind and encouraging words.i leave for work before the sun rises.in the hour it takes for me to get to work, i see dawn every day. my route is through open country with many...
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I'm glad you choose to offer a bit of insight as to the inspiration for this, Neil. I read it many times and enjoyed the images I took from it and the overall feel, but could not get a sense of it....
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Gentle indeed...I think back to the beat and rhythm of some of your other work, and this one sits like a ballad amongst a collection of faster-paced works...takes a couple of readings to really sink...
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I love the title...this read almost like a lullaby to me the images pouring over like warm oil... verrrrry nice! and so nice to be reading you again...alice
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Neil, First I want to thank you for the insight to this piece. I read it once again after you defined it. I love it and look forward to more of your work.
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gee ...so happy that this little jot has brought enjoyment.true appreciations to all who read and commented.neil.P.S. -ALICE!!!! beauty's in the eyes with the 20/20 vision like that - gso
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Oh Neil, I too remember driving in early morns, I think poets are so observant to their surroundings. I liked your images of leaves at their peak, a very calming write! Jo
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If i haven't mentioned...I DO love what you do with language...a whole lot!
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Hi Neil,You certainly have quite a range...I've read three of your poems in close sucessionand the pace varies from the frenetic...a stream of consciousness overflowing its banks,to the serene...
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Neil I love your description of your marvelous ride, nature makes the mundane magical, enjoyed your meditations!!!
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